Angel of Death

Hey KJ!!! Gosh you're like a freakin' time-bomb. Never know when you're going to write a new story. I loved this! It was refreshing because after all this time sticking ...

Hey Jared!!! Thanks for telling me you posted this. I must confess, I didn't like this as much as the other parts. Although it had all of the suspense and ...

Hello there! This was a beautiful sonnet. It was very vivid and pretty. Yeah I don't know much about Sonnet's but I do like Shakeaspeare and this is almost like ...

Hey Kylan! Thanks for PMing me. Well this was very short but really really good, as always. Your sentences are flowing better and they're not being eaten up by the ...

I give props to you. Four main characters? To tell you the truth, I couldn't do it. I'm not sure what to say is except, dedicate one week to one ...

Hey Kaylyn! This wasn't a bad start. I like how your MC seems like a normal girl and not some over the top character like some people tend to do. ...

Thats a great question. Often when writers start off writing gloomy, dark books, they can't seem to break from that emotion because that's what they're used to. What I suggest ...

Hello there! This was written very well. Your style of writing is exceptional. When you're telling a story you have to make sure that the first sentence hooks the reader, ...

Ha! You seem like a very cool person Jade. My name's Angel *waves* Welcome to the site. Yeah I do that a lot, do other things when I'm supposed to ...

This hasn't happened to me...yet and I hope it doesn't happen. This is my first year doing NaNo and if I forget or become uninterested with my current novel, then ...

Hey choc, here as promised! I liked the subject of this story. It was great how you made the reader wait till the end to figure out what was happening ...

Hello! Well since this was a only a prologue I won't be too harsh. This needs more descriptions. When this is the first thing a person reads, you want it ...

Note: This was hard to write so please be very harsh. I kinda like it but if there is anything wrong, please point it out. Thank you to both the ...

Ooh SIC I love your pics. I agree with Matt you are exceptionally handsome and I love the hat. Matt said: Kefka is hot. Loving the hair in the first ...

I love watching tv. Basically I like Heroes, Smallville, Supernatural, Boston Legal, Law and Order: CI, and CSI: Miami. Though I haven't been watching CSI due to the fact that ...